You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apologise.
In your letter, you should:
apologise to your friend
explain why you couldn’t attend the party
tell her what steps you will take to avoid missing it in the future.
Dear Maria,
How are you doing? The purpose of my writing is to apologise for not attending your birthday party. However, I was in Luxembourg to attend business meetings, workshops and training. Initially, it was a one week trip to Luxembourg due to trip extends to two months. Furthermore, while in Luxembourg I visited many famous places in that city to promote our products and for spreading awareness about the product my company launched in that city.
Besides, I am truly regretful that I fumbled your birthday party. I have had a plan to attend your birthday party as I never missed any of your invitations. Therefore, I bought a gift for you to present on the birthday of your likeness before visiting Luxembourg. The birthday present is enclosed.
I hope that you have accepted my apology for not attending your birthday party and forgiven. However, I will make sure for the future to avoid making such mistakes. Also, I hope that you will like your birthday present.
Yours Sincerely,
John Moses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98255813953 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71169671619 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4135690349 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9230769231 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2307692308 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239254963126 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960618100548 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749038422189 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170836145271 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438364144161 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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