Respected Sir,
This is to bring to your kind notice my decision to resign from your esteemed institution with immediate effect. This is because I am embarking on a noble journey that takes me to Nigeria in the heart of Africa where I would work as a rural medical officer with the World Health Organisation in their principal mission to contain the spread of deadly AIDS virus in the continent. Sir, I am taking this new job as I want to pay heed to my heart's calling so that I deploy my medical expertise and knowledge for the betterment of those who need it the most. I would like to tell you that spending the last seven years of my professional career in your world-renowned hospital has been, for me, a pleasure of the utmost degree. I gained so much experience from working in your organisation that gave me a solid platform to immensely hone my medical skills. For this opportunity, I cannot be more grateful to you.
Sir, I would highly appreciate if you bid farewell to me on a high note as is expected from your great personality. I also request you to issue me an experience certificate. It will prove to be invaluable for my future professional career.
Thanking you.
Yours Sincerely,
Dr. Gaurav Sudhir.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65137614679 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80519495954 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610091743119 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8956863787 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273407927726 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12130836309 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807747177593 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199147530233 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0087901327412 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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