Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this latter to inform you about I have a vacant room in my apartment and wish to keep it on a rent. If any female student in your university are looking for rental apartment then please refer my name to her. As I am living in the flat called 'Golden valley' and my flat no. is 444 in the C wing.
It is worth considering, that my flat is fully furnished with modern equipment and has all the amenities available. Moreover, apartment has 3 bedroom and a kitchen and each room has attached bathroom and a living area and 2 rooms has a fabulous view of the city from it's gallery.Furthermore, en empty room has dressing table, study table and a double bed couch. It seems to me, If I am hiring a tenant than it would be helpful in my extra expenses as well as might get good company of friend to avoid my loneliness. All in all, roomer should mature, sensible, silent and clean-freak and her belonging will not be allowed for more than 1 week.
To sum up with, If anyone is interested then please let me know as soon as possible and for more details you can contact me on my phone number below given: 00678934
Thanking you,
Your Sincerely,
Aahna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o her. As I am living in the flat called Golden valley and my flat no. is 444 in ...
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... and my flat no. is 444 in the C wing. It is worth considering, that my flat ...
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...ulous view of the city from its gallery.Furthermore, en empty room has dressing table, stud...
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...ll not be allowed for more than 1 week. To sum up with, If anyone is intereste...
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...on my phone number below given: 00678934 Thanking you, Your Sincerely, Aa...
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...ow given: 00678934 Thanking you, Your Sincerely, Aahna
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...hanking you, Your Sincerely, Aahna
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40454545455 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62556959582 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5522087486 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 4.34317383033 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193008547457 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682989534775 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727871487301 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110247914108 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737282953835 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.