You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
• describe a news story in your country
• explain why people are interested in it
• say how the story personally relates to you
Dear John,
Hope you are doing well in your new job. I am writing in connection to the recent news which is viral around the globe of the boy, 5 years old, who fell in a hole, 200 feet deep, dug for water extraction survived in the hole for 72 hours. I know that you work in a news channel and covering this story.
I am a big fan of your reporting and watch at least once in a day your channel. This boy has really made the world pray for him for his survival in the burrow. The Indian government is really doing a good job by digging another tunnel much bigger in size to save the boy. The boy is being given the oxygen and food through pipe. Even I could not leave the live update of the news as the boy is very small. The presentation of the news is exemplary and the way you have requested for the grant from the government is appreciable. The parents of the boy are well taken care of and consoled.
Although, I will be live with the news till the boy comes out of the tunnel but please keep me posted with latest updates on the news as I have a meeting in the afternoon. Also, make a plan of meeting up at my place.
Warm regards
Megha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... news channel and covering this story. I am a big fan of your reporting and watc...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: bigger
...good job by digging another tunnel much bigger in size to save the boy. The boy is being given...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...of the tunnel but please keep me posted with latest updates on the news as I have a meeting...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g up at my place. Warm regards Megha
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.05701754386 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12028177335 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600877192982 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0088749359 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1538461538 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155378780653 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522528024769 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555266432707 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104078879716 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217717536757 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.