Dear John,
I am glad to heard that you are going to join University. I feel honored that you ask me for career guidance.
It is very important to determine the career you need to choose. You have to consider all the factors like, scope or job opportunities and the field of your interest when deciding a career.
I am really surprised to know that your favorite subject is History, which is a boring subject for me. However, it is true that we need to select our career in our area of interest. But you need to weigh it with the scope of the field for job availability.
I prefer you to take computer science. As we are in a technological Era, plenty of vacancies are available in IT fields. It is a breadwinner job these days.
Now, it is your responsibility to take the final decision regarding your career selection. It is difficult to change your profession in future. So it is better to take a right decision now.
Hope you could make a better choice and wish you a bright future.
Best wishes,
Peter
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 134, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... is difficult to change your profession in future. So it is better to take a right decisi...
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Line 14, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ish you a bright future. Best wishes, Peter
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, regarding, so, i feel, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52688172043 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68373827905 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3384805096 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.1333333333 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222385610822 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705080228845 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591355045657 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118831366143 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537670012266 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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