You have a friend who lives in a different country You will organize a party soon and have thought to use a foreign recipe Write a letter to the friend asking for a recipe from his her country for the party you are organizing In your letter tell your frie

Dear Sam,

It has been a long time that we have seen each other, and I hope you’re doing well in your business. As you must be aware that my mother's birthday is in the next week, so I am planning to organize a party at my home. It will be going to be a special day as all my close friends and relatives are getting together after so many years.

To make this day even more special for everyone, I am planning to cook Italian pasta for all the guests as it is one of the most popular dishes and I am sure everyone would love to taste it. However, I am really worried about not knowing what all ingredients are used to make this dish. I tried to search for the recipe on the internet but didn’t find any reliable information. Therefore, it would be a great help if you share the recipe and ingredients to cook this delicious dish.

Lastly, this party would be incomplete without you, therefore, please be our guest on 5th April, and don’t forget to bring a beautiful present for my mother. I am sure, my mother will be really happy to see you after a long time.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best Wishes
Peter

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, look, really, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30092592593 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30783670431 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615740740741 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1368786357 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4545454545 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202539607543 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773063861317 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408005360784 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12684393946 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231257790084 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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