You have a full-time job and also doing a part time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
• Describe the situation
• Explain why you cannot continue at this time
• Say what action you would like to take
Write atleast 150words
You do NOT need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows
Dear …………………,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I would not be able to continue my evening course in French language for a few months. Let me explain my situation in detail.
I am working as an assistant manager in IDFC Mutual fund. Since, the organisation has launched a New Fund Offer from 24th September till 30th September. There is a lot of inflow of applications from the customers investing a huge amount of funds in the new schemes. Not only the applications have to be processed but also the high value cheques have to be banked on the same day.
My senior expects me to work for extra hours in office during this time with any errors and flaws. Investor applications are processed accurately, the cheques are banked as well as the funds are received in our pool account without any errors. As a result, I reach home at 10 pm so I will not be able to attend my classes from 6pm to 7 pm. Moreover, after reaching home I am so tired that I cannot focus on my studies and assignment.
I hope you will consider my situation and allow me to continue with my course and studies by joining the next available batch.
Your corporation will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to hearing from you soon
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... assistant manager in IDFC Mutual fund. Since, the organisation has launched a New Fu...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, well, you know, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56578947368 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62107553009 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8258809712 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0769230769 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169185368589 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532182284352 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569267316378 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101688370702 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057751641607 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.