You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course you now fine that you cannot continue
Dear Mr Hamed,
I am one of your students for Business Administration course and I am a part-time evening student. I recently changed job and I now work full-time with a Telecom company which is quite challenging combining work with studies.
Needless to say, I was recently made to oversee and manage a new project and it will take about 12 months to complete. This new role is very demanding and will involve staying over time and travelling. I have really thought about the new development and realised that there is no other alternative for me other than to defer the training till next academic year.
I spoke to my course advisor and he told me to discuss with you how I want the course rescheduled. I want to move the course till next academic year and will prefer a Saturday and Sunday program instead of weekly.
Kindly approve my course deferment and change of time.
Yours sincerely,
Liberty
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you how I want the course rescheduled. I want to move the course till next acade...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79874213836 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65201564444 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7450838921 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215071354662 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725073525616 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586341075101 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121352209036 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528069542818 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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