You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will he charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorr

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You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will he charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.

Dear Sir,
I’m writing to inform you that I received letter from the Bank two days ago. In this letter you stated that my account is 240$ overdrawn. This information related to my account is false, because I didn’t withdraw that money.
The matter is that I used my card from the bank to pay tuition fees for my studying in college. I’ve been paying for 2 years. Three weeks ago, I graduated the college and ask an operator from your bank to stop my monthly payment, as I was not student anymore. The operator assured me, that he had deleted that payment and the total balance on my card was 0$. However, for some reasons, payment was withdrawn. As there was no money on my balance, it took my money from the credit limit.
I think, you should contact our local college and they will submit that I finished my studying. So, you can send them a letter inquiring to send money back. You can also call me any time, if there is some data I need to provide
I hope this misunderstanding soon will be resolved.
Your sincerely,
Givi Gondon

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$240'.
Suggestion: $240
...is letter you stated that my account is 240$ overdrawn. This information related to ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$0'.
Suggestion: $0
...nt and the total balance on my card was 0$. However, for some reasons, payment was...
^^
Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... if there is some data I need to provide I hope this misunderstanding soon will b...
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'i think']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2 0.220444632235 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.178260869565 0.167888034529 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0217391304348 0.0606518309736 36% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.0506257000042 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.147826086957 0.118615021944 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0913043478261 0.107062808482 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0347826086957 0.041066498444 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43161683179 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0260869565217 0.0385302599488 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0739130434783 0.0714148451538 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0217391304348 0.0191574576366 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1053.0 1141.60824742 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.134020619 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.484375 5.53046319177 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.296875 0.284621296913 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213541666667 0.211203875043 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.125 0.133321485273 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0572916666667 0.0843313296314 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43161683179 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 61.4019704244 62.8969750728 98% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.7692307692 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.604559354 44.7399317507 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 90.9928171075 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.613754768223 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 36.1233974359 37.5504026743 96% => OK
Elegance: 0.882352941176 1.13073093955 78% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378356227777 0.331212695627 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103605881226 0.0927372745006 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0843509189489 0.0736520305886 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553914777993 0.579516596996 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18686071611 0.180689518051 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139863299806 0.122183219658 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927477396485 0.0765303033291 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.143462626698 0.211926503985 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0978283435049 0.0737400523855 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222729491936 0.203819188451 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113603972944 0.067151250289 169% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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