Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to express my gratitude for providing me the opportunity to join in the evening course "Project Management 101". Although I am satisfied with the quality of the teachers, contents, and methods but I am dissatisfied with the classroom facility.
The teacher's quality in our evening courses is spectacular. They are domain experts in project management and also have practical project management experiences which help us a lot. As they are teaching us from their practical life project documents, the method of teaching is very helpful.
However, sometimes a good quality teacher cannot teach well if the classroom environment is not supportive. Our college is situated just beside an international stadium. Whenever there is a match running in the evening, the noise coming from the stadium hinders our concentration on the classes.
As our college very big and also as we are evening students only, we will be delighted if you provide us classrooms on Annex building which far away from the stadium. I have talked with my fellow classmates and everyone is agreed on it.
So, I am requesting you to take necessary action to provide us a better environment to learn what we intend to do.
Yours sincerely,
Abed Joy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'classmates'.
Suggestion: classmates
...from the stadium. I have talked with my fellow classmates and everyone is agreed on it. So, I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15639810427 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96360082809 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616113744076 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6503301307 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14140674244 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474609209174 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532358753878 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072354534161 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369818167121 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.