Dear Website,
My name is John employed in a multinational organisation. The purpose of this letter to apprise about the defective mobile delivered, purchased from your online store.
Furthermore, it had been a shocking moment when faults incurred. Firstly, the phone reboots quite often. In addition to this, the pictures clicked using a phone camera are blurred in spite of possessing 12 Megapixel camera. Secondly, it hangs on various occasions such as, while playing high graphic games or using the internet. To Conclude, mobile has a manufacturing defect.
Consequently, the mobile possesses high standard specs according to my favourites. Therefore, please consider a replacement of handset with the new one within the next three days. Contrarily, process refund of the full payment. The order number is BDD-811. Also, the receipt of this order attached to this letter.
I look forward to hearing from you soon regarding my concerns.
Yours Faithfully,
John Moses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49342105263 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9002265529 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.743421052632 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6766811332 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6428571429 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8571428571 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 4.34317383033 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144491564439 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388714865669 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368995827369 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833508055632 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181341707626 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.38 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 7.59969072165 132% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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