you have just finished your college. write a letter to your best friend inviting him to stay at your place for one month.
- explain the situation
- mention your plans
- suggest what to bring
Dear Paul,
How are you ? I hope this letter finds you well. Although it's such a short time since we last saw each other, it feels much longer. I am writing to ask if you could join me for the 1month long summer holidays as i have completed my graduation and don't have any other plan.
Let me explain in more detail. I know that we also made plan in the past year but couldn't implement those and i was the real culprit. this time i have made a comprehensive list of activity which we will be doing throughout the month. we will stay in the beach area near to my house and have booked a hotel in advance with all the modern facilities along with all the recreational task such as climbing, horse riding and so on. The hotel has promised we that they will start the water related sports inside the hotel play ground, as soon as they possible can, so we would have an additional option.
could you please bring cash approx. USD 5000.00, as alone i wont be able to bear the expenses. would you be able to confirm me by end of this week so that i proceed further with my planning.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Your sincerely,
Kushal Rana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Paul, How are you ? I hope this letter finds y...
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Line 2, column 248, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s as i have completed my graduation and dont have any other plan. Let me expla...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...raduation and dont have any other plan. Let me explain in more detail. I know th...
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... we also made plan in the past year but couldnt implement those and i was the real culp...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...st year but couldnt implement those and i was the real culprit. this time i have ...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ement those and i was the real culprit. this time i have made a comprehensive list o...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... we will be doing throughout the month. we will stay in the beach area near to my ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Could
...we would have an additional option. could you please bring cash approx. USD 5000....
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Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
...ne i wont be able to bear the expenses. would you be able to confirm me by end of thi...
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Line 6, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... confirm me by end of this week so that i proceed further with my planning. ...
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Line 6, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat i proceed further with my planning. I am looking forward to hear from you. ...
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Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...y planning. I am looking forward to hear from you. Your sincerely, Kushal...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hear from you. Your sincerely, Kushal Rana
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30136986301 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21228724989 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662100456621 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1939558482 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2857142857 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138834360703 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498453802311 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489800091614 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600585013989 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03067672188 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.