You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to
search for full-time employment.
Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter
● explain why you will not pursue a full-time job in his/her company
● say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her
● tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am John, dweller of Huston Street London, working as a part-time accountant in your company. Gladly, I am inscribing this epistle to inform you that I have qualified as a CPA and passed my post graduation with distinction. Although your organisation is a fabulous place to work full time, I aspire to work in a transnational firm which would broaden the horizon of knowledge.
It is quite arduous task for me to abandon your organisation as I have sharpen all my traits here. Undoubtedly, the cordial and collaborative working culture of your company is quite conductive in learning pragmatical skills. Moreover, I really missed the the amicable environment which unconditionally supported my during my internship.
I have been short listed by one of renowned accountancy firm named KPMG and soon, I would be called for interview. Therefore, I assure you that I would continue with the work during this month. It would be highly appreciable if you clear my all amount due with you by the end of this month.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
JOhn
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- People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before Is it a positive or negative development 58
- yOu have been styding overseas and staying as a guest with a family for the last 6 months and have recently returned at home write to the family Thank them for having you Say what you enjoyed about living with them Tell them what your current plans are 89
- you want to sell your laptop you think a friends of yours might like to buy it from you 67
- you have been seen an advertiement looking for volunteer to teach english overseas write to recuitment officer tell them where you saw advertisement explain why you would like to go describe the skills that you have that you think wpuld help 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur company. Gladly, I am inscribing this epistle to inform you that I have qualif...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...rganisation is a fabulous place to work full time, I aspire to work in a transnational fi...
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Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sharpened'.
Suggestion: sharpened
... to abandon your organisation as I have sharpen all my traits here. Undoubtedly, the co...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...tical skills. Moreover, I really missed the the amicable environment which unconditiona...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...tical skills. Moreover, I really missed the the amicable environment which unconditiona...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al skills. Moreover, I really missed the the amicable environment which unconditi...
^^
Line 6, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h. It would be highly appreciable if you clear my all amount due with you by the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99459459459 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00325608543 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0190926839 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202741922683 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807538977317 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509466064567 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104347476412 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550990391189 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.