You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment.
Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter:
– explain why you will not be able to pursue a full-time job in his/her company
– say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her
– tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot and I am working here as a part-time worker for the last one year. I am writing this to inform you that, I am searching for full-time as I have completed my master’s degree.
I have completed my degree in software engineering and I want to join the job as a senior software engineer for full-time. I would like to apologize that I would not be able to continue as here I am working in the customer caring department.
I am really thankful to you for giving me the opportunity to join your company and explore myself. This is my first job and I really enjoyed working. I have learned the necessity of communication and how it affects the sale of the company. Even this helps me in building my personality traits.
I want to let you know that I will be leaving the company after one month as per the terms and conditions of the company.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...senior software engineer for full-time. I would like to apologize that I would no...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng in the customer caring department. I am really thankful to you for giving me...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39156626506 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72132511718 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6834820666 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260612439224 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953543915461 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674845924275 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133091518554 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418673501027 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.