Many Governments Think That Economic Progress Is Their Most Important Goal. Some People, However, Think That Other Types Of Progress Are Equally Important For A Country. Discuss Both These Views And Give Your Own Opinion.
In recent years, it is believed that the economy had has a major impact on the development of nations, therefore, many governments propose that economic progress is the most necessary purpose. Nevertheless, others claim that many other kinds of progress are equally important. I will discuss both views and state my opinion on in the essay below.
First and foremost, the economic movement is indeed vital for countries. This is because the economy provides citizens with abundant benefits such as: good facilities, high salaries, a better quality of life. Thus economic development can enhance the country’s position in the world. Taking Brazil as an example, the government has imposed lots of policies for economic development. As a result, the quality of life in Brazil has been considerably improved, which enables them to get better jobs and enhance their living standards. Furthermore, Brazil is ranked among five fresh power nations alongside: Russia, India, China and South Africa.
On the other hand, focusing on economic progress is not enough for the development of nations. Moreover, developing just only economy but forgetting other types of progress creates a variety of problems. Specifically, human activities and industrial has consequences for our life lives such as: overpopulation, climate change, pollution. As the most compelling evidence, Brazilian made has encouraged lots of deforestation for agricultural development, which created lots of forest fires in The Amazon forest. Without any doubt, this activity is detrimental for nature because this phenomenon reduced 15% of O2 of the world, resulted in the death of lots of people and animals. Hence, governments have to concern about other types of progress such as: environment, education, medical, security and defence to develop the country in a sustainable way and because all of these aspects are definitely important.
To sum up, I believe economic progress is necessary but it can create lots of problems. In my opinion, governments should pay attention to all aspects of nations such as: environment, medical and education as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.85567010309 467% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 937.175257732 192% => OK
No of words: 330.0 206.0 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97359669738 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 127.690721649 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 290.88556701 198% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5937448094 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.882352941 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 4.34317383033 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250836170633 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810229601181 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587737960694 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156120077201 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783408552168 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 41.2886597938 249% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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