You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:
• explain where you live
• describe the problem
• give reasons why you do not want this development.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
• You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in response to the article in your newspaper dated 10th January. My house is situated within 20 minutes walk from the airport. I would like to point out the problems which have caused serious damage to the residential area. I am fully sure that the problems will definitely intensify if the plan is carried out to expand the airport and increase the number of flights.
First of all, the increase in the flight number which increases the annoyance. They make huge noise hence I cannot concentrate on my study and work. This is not enough, because of late-night flights, I am unable to sleep. I met a doctor and because of sleepless I am diagnosed with Insomnia. In short, it will increase noise pollution.
Secondly, I am afraid that the expansion of the airport may reduce the plot of land for the playground which is under construction near the airport at the moment. To conclude, I strongly, disagree with the plan. I would appreciate it if you could possibly help us by writing an article about the problems and disagreement as I explained above.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 242, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
... the plan. I would appreciate it if you could possibly help us by writing an article about the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, in short, first of all, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69497909572 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2494676405 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7692307692 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218350366575 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643070283866 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051067076964 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125750585908 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491201930649 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.