You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete.
Write the letter to the company. In your letter:
• Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery
• Explain the importance of this delivery
• Ask for a replacement item to be sent
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction towards the order delivered to me on 29th March 2020 having order id: 349020
My name is Jot and I placed the order on 25th March 2020 with the above-mentioned order id. I was checking for a gown on the website for my anniversary. I searched everywhere but have got any as per my choice. In the end, I searched it on your website and this peach color gown with matching earrings. I was very pleased with the color of all the stuff. Hence, I placed the order without any delay.
Today, when I got the delivery of the order I was very excited while opening the package but all my happiness ended when I discovered that the earrings were missing and color of gown was pink instead of peach.
As I have already mentioned that, I have placed the order for my anniversary which is on 6th April and peace is the favorite color of my husband hence, this delivery is very important for me. This gown is very elegantly stitched and will enhance my beauty.
I would like to request, kindly replace the item and send the complete and correct order as soon as possible.
Look forward to hearing from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56422018349 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50381831127 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6432744302 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9166666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251008662894 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870052014743 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485647450911 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127271945986 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328932669534 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.