Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to a plan that extended local airport and increases the number of flights. My house is situated within 20 minutes walk of the airport. I am hoping that you would publish an editorial to protest the development.
First of all, the low-flying aeroplanes are utterly distractive because they make a big noise. This is a significant issue as a major part of our population comprises young school children. In addition, the noise of midnight flights always even affect sleep. If the number of flights increases, it will generate more noise pollution.
Secondly, the nearby farmland will be expropriated for development due to the airport needing land to be expanded. This will reduce residents’ income and lose their jobs. I would like to plea to the president an obstruction on this plan because an expansion of the airport will aggravate the problems in our community. I would appreciate it if you could write the article about the problems and disagreement as I said above.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ms and disagreement as I said above. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, in addition, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06914893617 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92490805727 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7817182503 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3076923077 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228858004402 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680751057379 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534170351352 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117698064484 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510423427648 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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