Dear Amber,
I hope you and your family are doing well in this holiday. I am writing a letter to express my thankful to you that you invited me having dinner with you and your family yesterday. I really felt at home, and I am glad to meet your family.
The food was absolutely delicious, especially the French cuisine. The steaks are the best cuisine that I haven’t ate before, because they are juicy and tender, as well as crispy outside and tender inside. Your mother is good at searing steak. On top of that, the simple decoration makes the room look energetic.
I can’t thank you enough for your dinner yesterday. Therefore, I would like to invite you and your family to my home have a small party. My family and I want to share a great memory with you and have a good relationship between our two family.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Warm wishes,
Suki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ner with you and your family yesterday. I really felt at home, and I am glad to m...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: HASNT_IRREGULAR_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'haven’t eaten'?
Suggestion: haven’t eaten
... The steaks are the best cuisine that I haven’t ate before, because they are juicy and tend...
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you soon. Warm wishes, Suki
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so, therefore, well, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34535410355 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9026383765 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373918930753 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12994122803 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125701704796 0.0603063233224 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217197622394 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16586275534 0.0580467560999 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.