The chart below gives information about the UK s ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035

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The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035.

The bar chart illustrates the data about the percentage of the elder population in the UK in the year 1985 and the projected population for the year 2035.
Overall, the figure shows the proportion of elders in all UK countries growth after 50years. In both years, Wales has the largest proportion of old people, while Northern Ireland has the least contribution of the elder population.
In 1985, Northern Ireland showed the lowest proportion of old people population at 12% which close to the growth of old people population of Scotland accounting for 14%. The percentage of the elder population in England and the UK both were 15%. Wales contributed the largest percentage of the elder population, which was 16%.
In 2035, the projected old people population of Wales and Scotland sharply increase to 26% and 25% respectively, while that of England and UK represented the same proportion at 23%. Although Northern Ireland experiences a double increase in 2035, it remains the least contribution of the elder population.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t contribution of the elder population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1497005988 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90907053605 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455089820359 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1770136993 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19694008848 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950187572275 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102100223754 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150084820052 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114999822754 0.0819641961636 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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