you have just moved to Canada and are in search of job. Write a letter to the local employment agency.
- describe your qualification
- mention what kind of job you want
- explain your expectation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to register myself with your agency for employment.
I am an aspiring Professional Accountant, who has done CA from the Institute of Chartered Accountants of India. I have also completed Masters in commerce with major in accounting and auditing with distinction. Apart from academic background, I have 6 years hands-on experience in field of accounting , auditing and tax return preparer.
Recently, I have migrated from India to Canada. Since I am a novice for the work-culture here, I would like to initiate with an apprenticeship to a CPA firm. This probationary period would enable me to fit into a new work place and assist me with getting a good job in Canada.
I would like to work on weekdays and flexible with the time schedule. It would be much appreciated if you search a job which can pay equivalent to the rate prevailing in current market.
Herewith, I have attached my resume. I am waiting for positive response from your end.
Yours faithfully,
Billy Silly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tute of Chartered Accountants of India. I have also completed Masters in commerce...
^
Line 6, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nds-on experience in field of accounting , auditing and tax return preparer. Re...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98837209302 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00200964019 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2142665131 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142878480049 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534423011839 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427262217096 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774224974154 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281456456438 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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