You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr and Mrs Anderson,
My name is Tolegen Tolegen, but my friends usually call me Tolik, so, please, feel free to use this name as well. Two weeks ago, my wife and I moved into your neighborhood from Vostok-1 district. In this letter, I would like to inform you that my family is arranging a party to celebrate this event. However, my wife thinks that I should make you aware of the possible noise.
My household is organizing a large party this weekend, since according to my culture, we are supposed to invite more than one hundred people. I intend to employ both singers and dancers to amuse the guests. This means that there will be much disturbing noise, for example, load music and the roaring of cars. Besides, I am sure that there will be numerous vehicles in the street. They will be quite noisy.
My mother suggested me to invite both you and your spouse to the celebration as a form of compensation. Hence, I would be delighted, if you accepted my invitation. You will certainly enjoy it, as there will be a great deal of dishes as well as entertainment.
I look forward to your reply as soon as possible, because we need to know the exact number of guests. You could phone me at the following number 870044411155.
Yours sincerely,
Tolegen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Tolegen
...ar Mr and Mrs Anderson, My name is Tolegen Tolegen, but my friends usually call me Tolik, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6814159292 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59357341741 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619469026549 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8326600918 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5333333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151257009898 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607952033776 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678612455912 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712148341376 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528307074414 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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