You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mr Patel,
I am John Mill, a banker, who has rented Mr Bikerman’s House situated beside your house. I am residing here from the last month. The reason for writing this letter is to let you know that a party is going to be arranged in my home on the eve of my marriage. It will be a great honor for me, if come and join in this party with your family members. And as a responsible neighbor, though I know this program will create some noises which may be disturbing for you. I apologize for that in advance and allow me to share some party plans.
My Friends and their family members will be invited as a guest and they will come around 6pm and stay till midnight. We will cook various items in the garden area and additionally, there will be a music system there. After having dinner, we are planning to arrange a DJ party. As it will produce lots of sound, it will be arranged as an indoor program. Additionally, I have thought about a kids’ zone where the young people can enjoy their time.
No more today. If you have any suggestions, please feel free to share with me.
Best wishes
John Mill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Patel, I am John Mill, a banker, who has rented...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37320574163 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40375270355 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4164175346 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2857142857 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1845757097 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053017550722 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562256505943 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108809569131 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882113684542 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.