You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Jones,
I hope you and your family are doing well. My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I have recently shifted into the neighborhood just adjacent to your house. This locality is breathtaking with beautiful and serene surroundings. I am hoping to enjoy a taste of our residential area.
I came all away from India, to search for new opportunities in Toronto. I have unpacked all of my stuff and clothes, and it is almost a week in which I never got a chance to introduce myself. So, I was hoping to introduce myself through this letter and want you to meet in person soon.
Besides, I have organized a dinner party for this new house. Since the house has been reconstructed to a duplex apartment along with a terrace and a garage. I decided to show a token of love and respect to my new home by organizing the event for my family and friends. The event has schedule for the coming Saturday and it starts from
6 pm to 11 pm. Plus, I have organized music and various kinds of exotic drinks for all the guests on this occasion.
I was worried about the noise which will come from the music and guests during the time of the event. But, If you will come to this dinner party, I would not need to be tensed about the disturbance which might you could receive from the party. Apart from this, I have invited the rest of the families living in our lovely neighborhood. It would be a great chance for all of us to be together and get to know more about ourselves. Therefore, I hope you will be coming to my party.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...earch for new opportunities in Toronto. I have unpacked all of my stuff and cloth...
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Line 7, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the coming Saturday and it starts from 6 pm to 11 pm. Plus, I have organized mu...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 299.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41806020067 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50052287012 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535117056856 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8753947343 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.05 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.95 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214713151841 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634783849579 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586445541336 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779122898794 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543636468346 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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