Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to the recent credit card statement, which I had received yesterday.
My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I am one of the premium customers of your HDC bank at Noida branch, as I am using the platinum credit card of your bank for the past half a decade. The purpose of using this credit card is that I have to travel outside the country for every two months to go on my business trips. In these trips, the platinum card is only allowed to make an international payments from your bank.
Interestingly and surprisingly, I notice in the current credit statement that there were a few of transactions made from my platinum credit card. However, I never executed those transactions. Those transactions listed a few of electronic items which were expensive such as a dell gaming laptop XD05, Samsung flip note latest mobile phone, I-phone digital watch and I-pods model 11 pro. Besides, the cost of all the items are approximately 3000 dollars.
I have enclosed the current statement with this letter for your reference.
I want your bank to look into this matter, and also I have filed a complaint of my credit card misused as to track the person down who was using my credit card. You will find the copy of the report attached to this letter. In the meanwhile, please block my credit card for any future discrepancies and issue me a new platinum credit card.
Kindly investigate the case and update me with the resolution as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'payment'?
Suggestion: payment
...s only allowed to make an international payments from your bank. Interestingly and su...
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Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'note the latest'.
Suggestion: note the latest
...a dell gaming laptop XD05, Samsung flip note latest mobile phone, I-phone digital watch and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, look, so, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77037037037 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64295009132 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.721825977 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264719317494 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859413374055 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578481681452 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125500594735 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628818924704 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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