You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:• Introduce yourself.• Explain that you did not buy

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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:

• Introduce yourself.

• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.

• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir,

I am writing in connection to inform you about the list of expensive things purchased in credit card. I am preeti an old customer of your bank. I never had any complaint from your bank. In despite that this statement seems wrong to me as thing which purchased through my card are of no use for me.

In the statement it show that I purchased a hand bang from zara worth rupees 10,000 on dated 2nd July from Chandigarh. On this day I was travelling to Shimla with my family and come back after few days. This bag is quite expensive and thus the payment of credit card is quite high. Apart from this many things are their which were not bought by me a headphone and makeup kit.

It would be great if you check the details of statement with your credit card department and send it back to me, So that I can pay the amount without fine.

Look forward to hear from you as soon as possible.

Your faithfully,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve things purchased in credit card. I am preeti an old customer of your bank. I...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s purchased in credit card. I am preeti an old customer of your bank. I never h...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... preeti an old customer of your bank. I never had any complaint from your bank....
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shows'?
Suggestion: shows
...f no use for me. In the statement it show that I purchased a hand bang from zara ...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elling to Shimla with my family and come back after few days. This bag is quite e...
^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...he amount without fine. Look forward to hear from you as soon as possible. Your f...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34482758621 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24338254129 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5576783615 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270742342301 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096860608478 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617675421638 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166341063289 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586640282108 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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