Dear Sir
I am writing this letter to bring into your notice about the inconvenience occurred during my recent trip.
There was a travel package booked by my uncle for 5 nights and 6 days for Dubai. In total the package include 3 adults, 2 infants and it was from 2nd March to 7th March. Though the brochure shared by you was really satisfying but in actual there is an enormous difference.
Actually, it was mentioned that the stay will be in hotel Castle which is a 4 star hotel with great services. However, we have been taken to Hotel Maple having 3 star rating, even we complained to our guide but he was not able to address. Moreover, it was also updated to uncle that free entry will be arranged for party at Cruise but we have been charged with 100 Dollars.
So it is a humble request to reimburse the extra charges incurred for which the receipts are also attached. Even I am expecting some compensation with respect to my hotel services failing to which I will take a legal action.
I hope you will give due consideration to this letter and may respond at earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Roman Sim.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...arch. Though the brochure shared by you was really satisfying but in actual there is an enormous diff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57425742574 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49345776667 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8935402338 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145718822659 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548453329532 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04189339364 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693546730424 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266763966307 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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