Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing to express my disappointment with my recent trip to Spain. I returned from the trip yesterday. I booked this trip from your travel agency with the assumption that the service would be excellent but I was wrong.
First of all, the accommodation provided was pathetic. Bedrooms had bedbugs which caused a lot of rashes on my body. The hotel management was irresponsible as they did not pay attention / pay heed to my complaints during my stay. They did not even change my room when I requested and even threatened that they would cancel my reservation.
I tried to reach the customer service of your travel agency over the telephone but no one picked my phone. I had even sent an email to your team. But nothing really worked. As I had paid for the services and I did not want to cut short the trip I had to put up with whatever services I received.
It would be great if you can look into my complaint, and refund 50% of the amount I paid for the accommodation. Let me know if you need any other details to review this matter.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible!
Yours faithfully,
John
Renu Khatri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in. I returned from the trip yesterday. I booked this trip from your travel agenc...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: SENT_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'emailed'.
Suggestion: emailed
... but no one picked my phone. I had even sent an email to your team. But nothing really worked...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54716981132 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6430465524 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599056603774 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6225319654 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8571428571 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206020945925 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070943020606 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061640447391 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120297941161 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640994364983 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.