You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Linda,
I hope this finds you well.
First of all, I would like to show my deep appreciation to you and your family for hosting the last vacation in your house. My husband and I were very happy with your kindness, hospitality and mouth-watering meals. Please kindly help to send my sincere thanks to your husband who were willing to take us to the airport.
By the way, I think my wallet that you gave me in my last birthday was left somewhere in your house. Specifically, it might be on the sofa in the living room as I guess. Thus, would you mind looking around to see whether it is on the sofa or not? There are some personal identity documents of mine in the wallet and I need them for upcoming driving license test.
Due to the urgent demand for it, I hope you could help to have it returned to me as soon as possible. To ensure your best convenience, I suggest you bring it to the nearest post office that I suppose to have seen about 3km from your house. The wallet would be carefully wrapped and please help to tick in the space that indicates payment method of COD.
I hope this will not take you much time. Please leave me a phone message when you have done it. Thank you so much again for your kindness.
I am looking forward to welcoming you to my house in coming winter holiday.
Yours sincerely,
Mai.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Linda, I hope this finds you well. First of a...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing winter holiday. Yours sincerely, Mai.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, thus, well, i guess, i suppose, i think, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.356 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30921978166 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9335861052 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0625 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413430307779 0.216113520407 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136449035523 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810072430662 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20800654944 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522973752618 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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