Dear Paul,
I'm writing to thank you for the awesome holiday, I really enjoyed every minute of it. I just went through our skydiving video and it is amazing. I really loved all the arrangements you made for our holiday.
When I got back home I realized that I forgot my wallet at your place. As I was very late for my flight I must have missed it. I left my wallet at the table next to the bed. It is made up of black leather with crocodile skin pattern on it and it contains all of my IDs, debit card and around $200 cash.
Could you be kind enough to send the wallet via courier to my home address? I would really appreciate the effort if you do as it contains the documents which I need on a daily basis. You can use the cash from my wallet to pay the courier charges.
Please keep me informed.
Your Faithfully,
Roy
- You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y 73
- You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to former teacher.In your lettergive details of the jobexplain why it is important to yousuggest what information your could put in the reference. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Paul, Im writing to thank you for the awesome ho...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rangements you made for our holiday. When I got back home I realized that I forgo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1801242236 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23842176568 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639751552795 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9749895746 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0833333333 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331455790107 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109127261625 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720691329594 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146662309001 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910037751583 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.