You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear John,
Thank you so much for such wonderful holidays. I really had blast with you after a very long time. Actually I’m writing to just let you know that I’ve forgotten my wallet at your place. Would you mind sending it back to me ASAP!
If I recall my memory I left it in draw of your guest room. I remembered that while I was packing my luggage I forgot to take it from there. After that you dropped me to the airport and pay for all the ticket and tariff so I didn’t get the chance to pull it out. I realized it when I had to pay for the cab. I starting looking it everywhere then I realized that I left it there.
As you know that I had my DL and RC in my wallet. I know I’m bothering you, but I really need these documents you know how hard it is to get these things done. One thing you can do is don’t send cash with wallet. It’s not safe. You just transfer it to my account. First thing, you can send my wallet via express mail or one of my relatives is visiting me day after tomorrow, he lives just two blocks always from your house, you can give it to them.
Thanks again for the wonderful memories.
Best wishes,
Aman.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...u mind sending it back to me ASAP! If I recall my memory I left it in draw of...
^^
Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...lized it when I had to pay for the cab. I starting looking it everywhere then I r...
^
Line 17, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the wonderful memories. Best wishes, Aman.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, look, really, so, then, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 32.9175257732 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23348017621 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24753374725 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6057507855 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0625 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410290301351 0.216113520407 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131601713776 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810678211093 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233411360985 0.12726935374 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122895808243 0.0580467560999 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.