You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Tanya,
Hi. Hope you are doing great. Well, I am writing this letter to tell you that I have left my purse at your place and realised this when I had to pay money to the cab driver after reaching back home.
First of all, I want to thank you for all the hospitality extended by you and your family. I never could have known the intensity of enjoyment unless i came to your place. These seven days flew like anything. I remember, I packed my luggage at the eleventh hour only and this is the probable reason of forgetting the my wallet in your cupboard on the last night of my stay. You know i was continuously telling you that I am forgetting something but was not able to recall what it was. Anyway, it's in the safe hands i know so i am not worried.
One of my colleagues is travelling to your city a day after. I have discussed the situation with her already and she has agreed upon to collect my purse from you. So you don't need to go anywhere. Just take a letter that I have handed over to her to ensure that you give it to the right person. Her name is Jenny and her contact number is 8586449320. I have shared your number with her too so as to avoid any confusion . Also, please make her speak to me before she leaves your home after collecting the wallet.
Thank you once again for inviting me to your place. Next time its your turn to come to my place. Take care.
Yours truly,
Navpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...known the intensity of enjoyment unless i came to your place. These seven days fl...
^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...is is the probable reason of forgetting the my wallet in your cupboard on the last nig...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... on the last night of my stay. You know i was continuously telling you that I am ...
^
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...not able to recall what it was. Anyway, its in the safe hands i know so i am not wo...
^^^
Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t it was. Anyway, its in the safe hands i know so i am not worried. One of my c...
^
Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Anyway, its in the safe hands i know so i am not worried. One of my colleagues ...
^
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...on to collect my purse from you. So you dont need to go anywhere. Just take a letter...
^^^^
Line 4, column 390, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... I have shared your number with her too so as to avoid any confusion . Also, please make...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 418, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ith her too so as to avoid any confusion . Also, please make her speak to me befor...
^^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...or inviting me to your place. Next time its your turn to come to my place. Take car...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, so, well, as to, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 32.9175257732 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17647058824 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21607786118 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8825028421 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1111111111 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416305241451 0.216113520407 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122058280307 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871500675537 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26042477453 0.12726935374 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240140325933 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.