You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday When you got home you realized you had left your wallet there Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thanks your friend for the holiday Explain that you left your wallet in their house give them in

Dear Priya,
Thank you so much for the wonderful stay at your vacation home. It was indeed a great time that we had! However, I somehow missed my wallet at your house while I was packing.
Oh! I'm still not out of the holiday mood. You had made such amazing arrangements for my stay and meals that I wished I didn't have to come back home. I specially loved the dinner spread on the first day and the departure brunch was like an icing on the cake. In between all the fun, I totally forgot that I had removed my wallet while I tipped the helper and left it in the living room. While I was packing, I assumed in it in my hand bag and just left. I realised about my wallet when I reached home and had to pay the driver.
Please keep the wallet safe with you as it has my credit card and driving license. Also, it would be great if you could courier my wallet by speed post at your earliest possible time.
I will look forward to hear from you
Your dearest friend,
Shikha

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...at your house while I was packing. Oh! Im still not out of the holiday mood. You ...
^^
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s for my stay and meals that I wished I didnt have to come back home. I specially lov...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...est possible time. I will look forward to hear from you Your dearest friend, Shikha ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15263157895 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03923428136 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1954848599 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.7272727273 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359623501544 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12804793947 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830265357479 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22003912272 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739276000368 0.0580467560999 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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