Dear John
I am absolutely fine and hope you will also be fine there with the grace of almighty god. Last weekend, which I spend with you was extremely awesome as we spend quality time with each other.
When, I came back I noticed my coat was missing. I forgot it at your lovely home. It is a black colour leather coat having a label of prominent company "Timbre". In the inner pockets it has some essential keys of my office. I am relaxed to find out that it is at your home.
On the day of my departure, when we came back from restaurant, I hang it at the back nob of guest room's door. I pampered myself and started talking with aunt therefore, I forgot the time of my bus. Thus, because of hurry I left it there.
Need Of keys, is desperately required. Perhaps, it would be a good idea that on coming weekend you come here and I will surround you with some amazing sites of my area. If it is not possible because of your hectic schedule send it to my by courier.
Now, I look forward to hearing from you and donot forget to pay my regards to your family.
With warm wishes
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John I am absolutely fine and hope you will a...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the grace of almighty god. Last weekend, which I spend with you was extremely awe...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...spend quality time with each other. When, I came back I noticed my coat was miss...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntial keys of my office. I am relaxed to find out that it is at your home. On...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rooms'' or 'room's'?
Suggestion: rooms'; room's
...ant, I hang it at the back nob of guest rooms door. I pampered myself and started tal...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fore, I forgot the time of my bus. Thus, because of hurry I left it there. Ne...
^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hurry I left it there. Need Of keys, is desperately required. Perhaps, it wou...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ards to your family. With warm wishes Urvashi
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Line 15, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... family. With warm wishes Urvashi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32380952381 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45446513379 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.697810273 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5333333333 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227990770007 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647683866544 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600116469036 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124050117119 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455359231422 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.