You have rented a car for few day from an agency However there are some problems with car Tell him her the problen of the car What you want the agency to do nowHow you feel about the problem

Dear sir

I hired a ford icon car before 3 days. On the very first day it has a problem in starting .while, I was coming from company it has broken down on the way. However, I manage the things

Today also going to my office I had a trouble in starting. I tried alot but all in vain when I hired it you assured me alot an counted me the enormous features of it. It is a pity for your estimed organization thatt you can not chech your vehicle properly before handed over to the customers. Now, you repay my advance and compensation of rupees thousand that today I had to hire a taxi to reach to my office as it has broken down on the way.

You are requested to pay attention to my complain and do your best to satisfied me.

I hope you will look in to the matter as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully

Presh verma

Votes
Average: 7.8 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir I hired a ford icon car before 3 days. O...
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.... On the very first day it has a problem in starting .while, I was coming from c...
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... first day it has a problem in starting .while, I was coming from company it has...
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...roblem in starting .while, I was coming from company it has broken down on the w...
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... it has broken down on the way. However, I manage the things Today also going...
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...n the way. However, I manage the things Today also going to my office I had a t...
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...things Today also going to my office I had a trouble in starting. I tried al...
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...ain when I hired it you assured me alot an counted me the enormous features of it...
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...sured me alot an counted me the enormous features of it. It is a pity for your ...
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...me the enormous features of it. It is a pity for your estimed organization tha...
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... enormous features of it. It is a pity for your estimed organization thatt you...
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...s a pity for your estimed organization thatt you can not chech your vehicle p...
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...your estimed organization thatt you can not chech your vehicle properly before ...
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...n thatt you can not chech your vehicle properly before handed over to the cust...
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... not chech your vehicle properly before handed over to the customers. Now, you ...
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...fore handed over to the customers. Now, you repay my advance and compensation of...
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...y my advance and compensation of rupees thousand that today I had to hire a taxi to rea...
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...thousand that today I had to hire a taxi to reach to my office as it has broken ...
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... to reach to my office as it has broken down on the way. You are requested t...
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.... You are requested to pay attention to my complain and do your best to satis...
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...s soon as possible. Yours faithfully Presh verma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16770186335 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33651024401 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633540372671 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2730995574 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5555555556 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189605137766 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677276406914 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330788995545 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112686045867 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231856303376 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.