You have just started a new course at college and your tutor has asked you to write him a letter telling him something about yourself.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
Dear Professor Thompson,
I am writing this letter in response to your request for a brief introduction about myself. I appreciate the time and effort you have made to inquire about me.
I am from a New York City, and I have always fascinated graduating from Miami Film-Making School of arts. I have been inclined towards movies and theatre since I was a little boy. I have always been an integral part of the dramatics group in school and consider myself a fairly decent scriptwriter.
Apart from English, I am also fluent with French and German. I have been on an exchange program to Paris last year, where I also learned baking. Social media platforms are my frequent outlets to express my creativity. Furthermore, I also enjoy traveling and often share a range of different videos, which I shoot and edit myself.
The prospectus of the college introduced all their faculty and mentioned their field of expertise. I am thrilled to have learned about your vast knowledge and experience. Moreover, I look forward to attending your lectures regularly. Thank you again for being warm and so welcoming.
Yours sincerely,
Kathy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Professor Thompson, I am writing this letter in response to ...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fort you have made to inquire about me. I am from a New York City, and I have al...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you have made to inquire about me. I am from a New York City, and I have alw...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... from Miami Film-Making School of arts. I have been inclined towards movies and t...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s and theatre since I was a little boy. I have always been an integral part of th...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er myself a fairly decent scriptwriter. Apart from English, I am also fluent wit...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to bake'.
Suggestion: to bake
...o Paris last year, where I also learned baking. Social media platforms are my frequent...
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Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... videos, which I shoot and edit myself. The prospectus of the college introduced...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rm and so welcoming. Yours sincerely, Kathy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01052631579 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76623888381 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7093196301 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202407611455 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651752539392 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640406227282 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103336017589 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920736735178 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.