You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
- Describe the item
- Explain where and when you left it
- Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the loss of my Laptop bag, my laptop bag has a Dell make Laptop which is black in color and some of my official files.
I was travelling in the Rajdhani Express, train number- 12993 which runs from Delhi to Mumbai on last 5th August 2019. The last time when I saw my bag was when I wake up in the night hours to use the washroom. When I returned back from the toilet, my bag was not there. I was really shocked by this incidence, as Rajdhani Express is a well-known train for its safety and security. I believe this incidence will downgrade the image of Rajdhani Express and certainly of Indian railways too.
In view of above I request you to kindly arrest the culprit and make the provision of handing over of my laptop to me at the earliest. Because my laptop has all my office works, of which I have not kept any backup.
Looking forward for your positive response.
Your’s sincerely
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you a...
^^^
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...top bag has a Dell make Laptop which is black in color and some of my official files. I was ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...night hours to use the washroom. When I returned back from the toilet, my bag was not there. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itive response. Your's sincerely XYZ
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42696629213 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34053331529 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612359550562 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.776069705 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105505223406 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039656468683 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209753720393 0.0603063233224 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574700235508 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181477557468 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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