You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter:
1. Describe the item
2. Explain where and when you lost it
3. Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
Myself is Raghav and I am a regular passenger of your blue line service. Here I am writing reagarding the valuable belonging of mine that I suspect I lost in the train.
It is a Ipad of apple company it was kept in black color leather bag and weight should be around 1.5 KG. I can recall it clearly I boarded train (train number 1234) at Janakpuri railway station and coach number was B5. I put the Ipad bag on the luggage rake just above my seat and while deboarding I forget to take it with me.
Here, I would like you to please check this item in your lost and found section it should be there only and let me know the procedure of getting it back. I am enclosing the picture and copy of Ipad bill along with this letter.
Awating a positive and swift response from you.
Thank you.
Your Faithfully
Raghav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...I suspect I lost in the train. It is a Ipad of apple company it was kept in bl...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: train
...5 KG. I can recall it clearly I boarded train train number 1234 at Janakpuri railway statio...
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Line 8, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... letter. Awating a positive and swift response from you. Thank you. Your...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18112989924 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4469540497 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5555555556 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249218611884 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874411192808 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657664176179 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117695114999 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513768775508 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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