You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you
Write a letter to the director of student service .In your letter
1 Advise them of your situation
2 Explain how this is affecting you
3 Request a new card
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you with respect to my student identity card which I lost two days ago in a local bus while traveling to home from college.
I had kept my Identity card in my college bag and by accidentally, I forgot my bag in the bus. I also lost my other valuable items along with it. I have already reported to lost property department with the bus service provider. But they informed me that this might take couple of weeks as they normally transfer all lost property to their central deport and the process to get lost items may take couple of weeks.
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No. of Words: 239 200
Write the essay in 20 minutes. and sentences need to be polished.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 239 200
No. of Characters: 1069 1000
No. of Different Words: 137 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.932 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.473 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.446 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.071 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.787 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.379 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.709 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.194 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4