You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course Write a letter to the course director In your letter explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possi

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You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter,
explain your interest in the course
describe your problems
find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter as I have enrolled in the premier cricket course and wanted to discuss something related to it.

Since I have been playing cricket from my childhood, I was interested for this session as this would give me an opportunity to learn and play with the international cricketers. Moreover, the certifcation after the event would help me to apply for the national cricket tournament.

While I was preparing for this tremendous curriculum, I got infected with the Coronvirus. Consequently, I have got a severe fever and weakness. My doctor has advised me to isolate myself for fifteen days and take the prescribed medicines.

I feel terrible that I would not be able to be a part of this exciting course because the event would commence from tomorrow. Therefore, I would want to know if there are any refund policy of the admission fee as I would not be participating due to the mentioned challenge.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Chirag

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98830409357 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95852108829 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625730994152 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6004291826 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166861517455 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062581527112 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524645724829 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813889572131 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648816115728 0.0580467560999 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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