Dear Igor,
I hope the letter reaches you in the best of health. I am elated to have received a letter from you after a really long time. I know that life is very busy for you now. I sensed a lot of curiosity in the last letter you wrote to me. Allow me to elaborate.
Every place has a story to tell. Likewise, my city has a story to tell as well. However, some cities have a serious thing to discuss, but in my city, everyone seems to be excited about the FIFA World Cup 2018. As you know, we are hosting FIFA World Cup 2018 and the preparations are underway. It is a football fiesta that is held once every 4 years and the host nation is decided years in advance on the opening day of the world cup.
The news is doing rounds on multi-platforms such as Radio, Television and Social Media etc. Although I have lived in Moscow for about 9 years now, I have never seen an influx of hundred thousand people as I have witnessed in past few days. The whole country seems to be taken aback by the soaring numbers of visitors. The hotels are fully booked. Further, the media had interviewed one of the top hotel managers and they had expressed their shock as none of them expected a tremendous response to the event.
Furthermore, this time not only Russians, but many people from different countries across the world are coming to support their national teams and moreover, some tickets have been allocated to non-playing nations and the response is amazing and it is making the media go crazy. You will be surprised to know that we do not usually have these things to report in our country, however, the media has devoted manpower to cover the biggest event of 2018.
I hope your curiosity to know about the current news in my country has paid off. I hope to hear from you again soon.
Best Wishes,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tter from you after a really long time. I know that life is very busy for you now...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...now that life is very busy for you now. I sensed a lot of curiosity in the last l...
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Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ack by the soaring numbers of visitors. The hotels are fully booked. Further, the m...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, really, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 937.175257732 159% => OK
No of words: 337.0 206.0 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42136498516 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33033868517 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 127.690721649 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572700296736 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 290.88556701 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9554405909 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214312381336 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542315134291 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596130867188 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120071545608 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611961768103 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.