Dear John,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the problems, I am facing due to the banyan tree in your courtyard.
The branches of the tree are so big, that they are covering more than half of my backyard. The leaves are falling here and there on the grass which are creating a lot of inconvenience for me. Sometimes, the wood from the bark also come along and once, it hit me, as, I was standing in the area and my head started bleeding immediately. The debris also come inside my living area whenever the wind blows and it becomes very difficult for us to clean again and again.
It was not bothering us before, but, since last year, it is creating a huge trouble for me and my family, as, now, the tree has become huge and no one is doing anything from your side.
This was ignored previously, as, no one was living at your place and now, you have come back, so, I want you to look into this issue. You should either cut down the branches a little, or, put some high fence around, so that they do not cover my space.
I am looking forward for the positive response.
Yours truly
Rupali Mahajan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35545023697 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17757942672 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625592417062 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7223055202 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106491458647 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419582652018 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051790908761 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578112734489 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592739027154 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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