You have a problem with a neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter
. Describe the problem
. say how long it has been a problem.
. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take
Dear Mr. Steve,
I am writing to bring your immediate attention towards the inconvenience faced in regards to the barking noise by your dog. It used to be a very peaceful environment before the dog started ruining it by its continuous barking, which has become a major headache in the society.
It all started when you decided to keep a dog as pet, in last month. Prior to that, this locality was considered as one of the most serene area to live in but now it is noisy and fearful by the danger of dog. Furthermore, my final exams are starting from next week and concentrating in such atmosphere is impossible. It will jeopardize my future career if I do not perform well in this examination.
I would be really grateful if you can find a way to fix this or if you can relocate the dog to relatives for some time. Further, please see a veterinary doctor if he can suggest any solution, which can rectify the situation if it has to do something with health. We must bring back the former reputation of the locality.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Sandip Ramani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...tention towards the inconvenience faced in regards to the barking noise by your dog. It used ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, really, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57286432161 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68374642738 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668341708543 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.334168448 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0922317267315 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352033526493 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364099826986 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519667892404 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01799175006 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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