You have purchased some goods from a company and the goods were supposed to be delivered within three days of purchase. Seven days have already gone and you have not received the products yet.
Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged the delivery of goods. In your letter:
• inform him/her what items you have purchased
• ask the reason for the delay in delivery
• suggest what can be done about the matter
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the delay of delivering the good I purchase from your company to my address.
On 25th of September I visited your company Croma to purchase electronic gadgets which include a Samsung Television, Philips Hair Straightener and Sony Music System. I made the payment through by Axis Bank Credit Card. My invoice number is 2566566. It was assured to me that the products I purchased will be delivered to my house address till 28th of September.
Unfortunately, it is 1st of October and till now I have not received the products to my place. I am very disappointed with the quality of services provided by your company. I want to know the exact reason for the delay in delivering the products? Are there some issues with the products I purchase or with the delivery chain?
I would like you to deliver the products as soon as possible to my home. Otherwise I would like to cancel my order and moreover, will give instructions to my bank to reverse the credit card payment.
I hope you will look into my matter and will take necessary actions to get it resolved immediately. I am attaching the copy of the receipt for your reference.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...roducts as soon as possible to my home. Otherwise I would like to cancel my order and mor...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...py of the receipt for your reference. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78378378378 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74062361052 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3678411947 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203195376216 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640269792905 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584539580457 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109400114735 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493073619538 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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