You have read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
- Correct the information in the article
- Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
- Suggest what the magazine should do about the situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
With reference to the Times travel magazine issued on 31st July 2019, I'd like to emphasis the false information given in one of the articles in the magazine. In particular, that article stated that the murder incident happened in Colombo 7, where I'm living. However, which is false information as there was no such incident reported in my town in the recent past. I believe that someone has given such false information to the editor of the magazine either by mistake or deliberately to spoil the repute of my town.
Therefore, I urge the editor of the magazine to make the corrective measures and actions to rectify news.
As this is one of the world-famous magazines all over the world, it is your responsibility to make sure the accuracy of the news that you publish. As millions of people around the world read this magazine and they may come to certain conclusions by referring to your magazine. Therefore, it is highly important to publish only accurate information with supporting evidence.
I’m not going to take any legal action against the magazine, though I can easily win, as this was the first time it happened. However, I urge you to correct the reported news in the next edition of the magazine with your apology. However, if you did not do so, I may have to look forward to taking the legal action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'd
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, in particular, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72765957447 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65674402577 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570212765957 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.0432772233 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 4.34317383033 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252921612801 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896389934093 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035947207919 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132840802273 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426962681021 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.