You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been satisfied customer for several years, but I am writing this letter regarding my mobile phone bill I received on 1 March 2020, which include a total of Rs.900 for international call charges. In fact, this charge are completely wrong for the following reasons.
I don’t use my phone to make international calls, either to my home or to any country. I use my phone purely for local calls and four calls to my office which and national calls.I have checked my call summary, and there is no record of any international connections. As you know there is no possible reason for me to be charge for International calls, and this is easily conformed by my phone records.
Therefore, I am request to you that you withdraw this charge and change my bill according to my use. I also ask you to confirm to me in writing that this has been actioned,by sending a copy of the revised bill to me at this address.
I look forward to receiving your conformation that all is in order.
Kind regards,
Nidhi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...s to my office which and national calls.I have checked my call summary, and there...
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Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s to my office which and national calls.I have checked my call summary, and there...
^
Line 8, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
... in writing that this has been actioned,by sending a copy of the revised bill to m...
^^^
Line 8, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the revised bill to me at this address. I look forward to receiving your conform...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, regarding, so, therefore, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65945945946 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75698992125 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9205452384 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425905280138 0.216113520407 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178013622887 0.0766984524023 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981562066595 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231940914023 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975219005691 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.