Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection with your short course on Advanced Accounting which I recently attended in your office in London. As you might see from your records that I attended this course on 2 -3 January with trainer XYZ.
In relation to this course, I would like to state that it was an excellent training program which really met my requirement. I could learn new accoumting practices and policies. What I really liked, and was important to me was that the training also covered about the recent standards issued by governing body and regulators. This was a marked difference from the courses that I had previously attended.
Nevertheless, one thing that I think can help this course to be better is the inclusion of comparative studies of accounting practices adopted by other countries' accounting boards. This would give us an extra edge in case someone wants to apply for a job in another country. I would say that this would make the tutorials even more comprehensive.
Should you have any questions, please contact me.
Yours faithfully,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntly attended in your office in London. As you might see from your records that I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02747252747 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8020954517 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675824175824 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2218257424 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1818181818 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238443109488 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867766067514 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886309386649 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146348115827 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114136188765 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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