Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Madam,
I read with a great pleasure about the news that your organisation is going to give an award to someone who has contributed positively to our community. I especially liked your idea that you expect readers to suggest the name of a deserving candidate. Therefore, I take this opportunity to forward the name of Boris Boris as a suitable candidate for this award.
Boris Boris is a maths teacher in our local high school. In his spare time, he offers free tuition classes to students who are weak in his subject. Boris Boris thinks that it his duty to assist young schoolchildren whose family is not so well off.
In my opinion, your organisation can provide some monetary benefits to Boris Boris so that he can improve the condition of classroom. Currently, the class does not have a heating system and during winter, it's really terrible for students and teacher.
If you need any more clarifications, please feel free to contact me.
Yours Obediently,
David Donald Duck
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Boris
...this opportunity to forward the name of Boris Boris as a suitable candidate for this award....
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Boris
...suitable candidate for this award. Boris Boris is a maths teacher in our local high sc...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'maths'' or 'math's'?
Suggestion: maths'; math's
...e for this award. Boris Boris is a maths teacher in our local high school. In hi...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Boris
...o students who are weak in his subject. Boris Boris thinks that it his duty to assist young...
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Line 13, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Boris
...n can provide some monetary benefits to Boris Boris so that he can improve the condition of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, therefore, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98224852071 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74813692775 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686390532544 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2746467936 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172535599846 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624574139096 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472713296766 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853909548732 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670645824027 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.