You have recently come back from Overseas holiday. You faced some problems m with the hotel booked through your travel agent.
Write a letter to your travel agent in your letter
Details about hotel booking
Problems that you face there
Give suggestions to a travel agent so that such problems are not repeated
Dear sir,
My name is Tom Smith. Recently, I booked the hotel via your travel agency to enjoy summer holidays with my family in Maldives. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction for the provided facilities and amenities during the trip. On 20 March 2018, I reserved hotel villa 5 star for my stay and the reference number of booking is 8 x y z m a l ind.
During the trip, I faced various problems from the beginning to end. Firstly , the behavior of hotel staff was awful. Owing to this, the balcony of deluxe room was filthy and room service was not excellent. Secondly, the mattresses was too atrocious due to this I suffered from itching in the night. Lastly, the severed cousins smelled odorless and not delicious. Moreover, they charged extra service charge for meals even all included in the tour package.
However, I am highly disappointed and frustrated from your reputed travel agency. I felt that you management will look and took serious action against partner hotel. I am enclosing the details of various biased bills and looking for compensation.
I am seeking for positive response from your side soon.
Yours sincerely
Tom
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir, My name is Tom Smith. Recently, I booked...
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...tar for my stay and the reference number of booking is 8 x y z m a l ind. Dur...
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...service was not excellent. Secondly, the mattresses was too atrocious due to this...
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... extra service charge for meals even all included in the tour package. Howeve...
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...bills and looking for compensation. I am seeking for positive response from y...
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...from your side soon. Yours sincerely Tom
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87939698492 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65894245895 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683417085427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9473560855 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2666666667 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.49484536082 669% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215651249322 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670561976137 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687061106584 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114819586196 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377729292655 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.