You have recently joined an evening course but you are finding it difficult to attend.
Write a letter to the course coordinator. In your letter
– Provide the course details.
– Explain why you are finding it difficult to attend.
– Suggest what could be done.
Dear Mr Smith,
I am Nirav Dave, a student enrolled for the IELTS coaching with enrolment number XXXX. I am writing this letter to inform you
about difficulties in attending an evening batch. By considering my eligibility to get permanent residency in Canada, I suppose to score minimum 7 bands in IELTS General and for improving writing and speaking skill I have registered in the last batch from 8:00 pm to 9:30 pm as I have job during day time.
Indeed, during first week all things went well as per plan; however, owing to an additional responsibility to lead a significant project, I have to continue
working at workplace till 9:00 pm. The hectic schedule throughout the day has put physical and mental stress on me which apparently makes impossible for me to attend and concentrate in session after returning home.
To get out from this unavoidable situation, I would be grateful if you put my membership on hold for a while and consider the same for the next month's batch. Otherwise, please suggest me if weekend session is possible to arrange as I could manage time during that period.
Hope you would understand the circumstances and reply with plausible solution at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Nirav Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tending an evening batch. By considering my eligibility to get permanent residenc...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...batch from 8:00 pm to 9:30 pm as I have job during day time. Indeed, during firs...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, so, well, while, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.995215311 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84992399943 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3270952094 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147551316629 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651577911783 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732592456689 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675125212272 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276344885928 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.